Lultrills · Alternative
AMIWRONG?
Naming the person or identity keeps the conflict anchored to who is speaking and who is being addressed.
OPEN IN REVIEW ↗43Cus in private they all mutterThe line advances the active argument while staying inside the song’s rhyme, image or emotional chain.
OPEN IN REVIEW ↗50You start to mutterThe writing points directly at a receiver, keeping the record relational and confrontational rather than abstract.
OPEN IN REVIEW ↗51I knew you were like the othersThe putter begins a dense directional chain: hit, gutter, stutter, rudder.
OPEN IN REVIEW ↗57U gon stutterCalling the self a star makes visibility resistant to shuttering or enclosure.
OPEN IN REVIEW ↗61So fuck a shutter“I think I’m through” sounds final, but the rest of the song immediately shows that finality is still tentative.
OPEN IN REVIEW ↗78You start to mutterThe writing points directly at a receiver, keeping the record relational and confrontational rather than abstract.
OPEN IN REVIEW ↗80Those words that make me shutterThe line advances the active argument while staying inside the song’s rhyme, image or emotional chain.
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